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This is my third My Little Pony animation commission. This was requested by :iconcielorey: CieloRey. Flightless is an Original Character created by CieloRey.

Well finally, right? This one took a LONG time to do. The first reason is obvious. The second reason, the last two months of school really had me bogged down in work so I could only animate pieces of this at a time. But it’s finished, I’m glad, and I can take a breather now. It occurred to me during the animating process, the splitting tree at the end would be like the pony equivalent of walking away from an explosion, lolz.

This is without a doubt THE most complex pony commission I’ve done so far; and it’s also the first time I’ve experimented with Flash’s blur filter. Because of the amount of work, time and effort put into this commission I’m going to add more and change the Commission Rules.

I would like to thank :iconboneswolbach: and those who work on fav.me/d5er8tl for the resources from MLP-VectorClub for giving me ideas for the backgrounds. Helped A LOT.

If you want your My Little Pony Original Character animated, then visit this page for details

MLP FiM Animation Commission Catalog (5/16/2014) by MAJORA64

Completed Commissions
:bulletred: Starling for Squeno/Aoxis
:bulletorange: Swift Flying for outlaw4rc
:bulletyellow: Flightless for CieloRey
:bulletgreen: Short Hilt for SayaArt
:bulletblue: Raindew for thetriforcebearer
:bulletpurple: Surfing Blossom for outlaw4rc
:bulletpink: Air Guitar for Aire Geetar
:bulletred: CieloXLuna for CieloRey
:bulletorange: Ester for Captain-of-the-Guard
:bulletyellow: Phenomenon for Captain-of-the-Guard

Test Animations
:bulletred: Applejack Run Test Animation
:bulletorange: Twilight Sparkle Walk Test Animation
:bulletyellow: Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo Fly Animation
:bulletgreen: Pinkie Pie Bounce Animation
:bulletblue: Vinyl Scratch/DJ p0n-3 Head Bop Test Animation
:bulletpurple: IAmSwagg Walk Test Animation
:bulletpink: Chroma Cutter Walk Test Animation
:bulletred: Princess Luna Hair Test Animation
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:iconx-short-hilt-x:
This is a very well done and high quality animation, however, there are some flaws that I noticed.

Considering this is a male pony, there are some points where his face turns feminine. (The smaller snout, such as in the end.) Try to keep it a little more consistant - especially when someone is paying you.

On the originality scale, it's hard to get original pony poses using the show's style. But you did well! This also exceeded my expectations. Whenever I see animations I always see a looped animation like a pony running, flying, or in some cases falling. It was nice to see something original and creative. Well done!
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:iconyukithewolfgirl:
yukithewolfgirl Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Artist
whats wrong with the shadow at the end?
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Several transparent shadows overlapping each other, thanks for pointing that out because I plan on updating some of these animations at some point
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:iconyukithewolfgirl:
yukithewolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Artist
ok
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:iconbluefire11400:
Bluefire11400 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Artist
Good Job!
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:iconwolfheartrocks:
Wolfheartrocks Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow...
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:iconlovelyloyal:
lovelyloyal Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
DUDE THATS AWESOME!!!!!!!
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:icondigital-quill-studio:
Digital-Quill-Studio Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh god lagg

From what I can see it looks lovely!
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:iconneatsketch:
NeatSketch Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just look what an amazing work is here! :iconponyclapplz:
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the compliment!
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:iconcycoclash25:
cycoclash25 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
This is really good, but your pony animations are always too big for my screen resolution xD
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:iconpikachu1089:
Pikachu1089 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i want one of this pony my oc flying note [link]
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:icondestinydecade:
DestinyDecade Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing.
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:iconbammytess8:
bammytess8 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
its good but the shadow is looped
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:iconrangerkom:
rangerkom Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
ironically, Flightless is not flightless.
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:iconthedashinpony:
TheDashinPony Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!
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:iconfascist-templar:
Fascist-Templar Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Heh, the shadow of the tree being sliced in pieces keeps repeating, just to let you know :D
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I had no idea, lol, another thing I can fix laters.
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:iconoutlaw4rc:
outlaw4rc Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting backgrounds. My only quibble would be that the ground looks relatively plain in respect to the surrounding trees.

As for everything else, the head shapes turns into one of a mare at the end. Given the lack of stallion head references, I suppose that's understandable, especially with being able to get the head turn to look right.

Good work. :)
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for noticing those mistakes, they're something I can fix after the New Year.
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:iconx-short-hilt-x:
x-Short-Hilt-x Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is VERY well done! I'll drop a critique on this for you - since I have a little to say about it. :)
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:iconpinknailpolish89:
pinknailpolish89 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazinggg!!!!
youve come so far luke! :D love it!
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks Vikki!
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:iconjulita-5-kiara:
Julita-5-Kiara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!! You are very talented
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:iconmajora64:
MAJORA64 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Late reply, but thanks!
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:iconthispirateship:
thispirateship Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
so AWESOME! :iconso-awesomeplz:
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:iconmasterzehnny:
MasterZehnny Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's pretty freaking awesome!
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:iconcielorey:
CieloRey Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It came out rather nice, better than expected for the most part. I’m quite impressed with the background and everything. All in all I am quite pleased and you were right my money did not go to waste. I am glad this was hard for you and I was able to challenge you, I hope you had fun doing this and perhaps we can work together again sometime if you’re interested.
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